Excerpt from The PURE (3/1/10 updated)

I really liked this scene between the heroine and the hero.  They are still platonic co-workers at this point but the barriers are falling fast.  I like the sweet unspoken intimacy between them.

These 2 scenes span portions of 2 chapters and the “kiss” (Gayle) and text messages (Jon) is referencing a Friday night work party incident just two days before these Monday/Tuesday scenes.

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Thirty minutes later, I heard Jon rustling in his cubicle as he slipped on his jacket.

“Lunchtime?” I grabbed my purse to join him.

“Yeah, but I can’t go with you today.  I have some errands to run.”

“Oh…okay.  See you later then.”

Neither one of us had mentioned his text messages from the night of the Ternes’ party thirty-six hours ago.  I had attributed his flip-flop messages to him giving me a taste of my own medicine.  But I didn’t know if he sent them out of annoyance or in jest.  That he might now be avoiding me because of what I had done saddened me.

I asked Scarlett to lunch and though surprised at my invitation, she agreed to go.  She suggested a place I’d never been to before but declared it served fabulous food and played jazz, always nice in my book.

The place was borderline seedy, dark and smoky inside but a cool oasis from the unseasonably warm Dallas afternoon.  The aroma of fried foods weighed heavy enough to serve as an appetizer.  Home-style offerings like corn bread, collard greens, barbeque and catfish dominated the menu.  Though I was more a fan of Mexican food, being from Albuquerque where the hotter the better was our culinary battle cry, I welcomed some traditional greasy southern cooking.

We sat at a table near the back with a good view of the entire restaurant.  Our server delivered our food a scant ten minutes after we ordered, a fringe benefit of a limited daily menu.  We enjoyed our food and gossiped about the Ternes’ party until Jon walked in with a very beautiful woman.

Scarlett saw him too and said, “Isn’t that Jon?”

“Yeah, looks like he’s got a date with him,” I muttered.

“Do you want to invite them over to join us?”  She kept her eyes on the couple as she asked.

“No.  Let’s give them some privacy.  I don’t want to cramp my boy’s style.”  I shovelled a huge fork full of greasy food in my mouth as I watched them walk to a small table near the bar, his hand on the small of her back.

From what I could see and imagine, this woman was a Victoria’s Secret model with a day job as an investment banker.  Tall and slim but nicely endowed, Latin-looking with long curly hair, she was the exact opposite of me.  Her knit suit hugged her curves in all the right places.  Together, they made a sultry and arresting couple.

Jon and his “errand” ate and conversed, their heads close but their expressions indiscernible.  While they didn’t touch, their body language told me she wasn’t a sibling or casual acquaintance.  I don’t think Jon had any idea that I sat a few tables away.  I couldn’t stop myself from glancing at them all through lunch.  By the time Scarlett and I had finished, I’d shredded my napkin into multiple tiny ropes that I tied together to form a long chain with a noose on the end.  I had no recollection of what we talked about after I’d seen Jon and his mystery woman.

“Come on, Scarlett, let’s say hello on our way out.”  I didn’t wait for her answer but grabbed my purse and marched toward Jon’s table.

As I neared, Jon’s head popped up and did a double-take.  Even in the darkened restaurant, I could see him blanch.  I gave him a brittle smile and said, “Hello Jon.  Get all your errands done?”

“Gayle.  Yes, all done.  Uh, Thalia these are two of my co-workers, Scarlett and Gayle.  This is my girlfriend, Thalia Milano.”  Though his tone was upbeat, his eyes betrayed his distress.  Thalia was unreadable—neither friendly nor aloof.  She was still breathtaking but not as beautiful up close and she had an annoying, whiney voice.

I hoped my jaw hadn’t dropped too far at Jon’s introduction of her as his girlfriend.  Why he hadn’t mentioned her or brought her to the Ternes’ party?  I prayed to God he hadn’t told her about the kiss.  Surely not since it was a one off, but had I detected her giving me the stink eye?  Get over yourself, Gayle.

As Scarlett and I left, she casually asked, “Did you know he had a girlfriend?”

“No.  Did you?”

“If you didn’t know, I sure as hell didn’t.  But damn, that woman was gorgeous.  Ooh, I spy a cookie shop.  Whaddaya say?”

Scarlett and I made our way back to the office within our one hour lunch break.  Jon returned an hour after us.  He walked past my cubicle without a word, slipped off his jacket and resumed his work.  At five when I left, he kept working.  We hadn’t spoken since lunch.

“Goodnight, Jon, see you tomorrow,” I said.

“Goodnight, Gayle,” I heard him reply after a long silence.
Chapter 6:

The next morning, Jon had his head down working when I plopped my purse on my desk and slipped off my jacket.  I sang along to a slow elevator music version of Billy Idol’s Rebel Yell.  I never understood why anyone thought it was a good idea to pipe in bad background music.

“Good morning, Jon.”  I had done some soul searching last night and decided that Jon’s reasons for keeping Thalia under wraps all this time were his own.  They had nothing to do with me nor with our working relationship.

Shuffling of papers and the popping of his chair as he shifted were the only noises he made inside his cubicle.  Is he mad at me?  Did he not hear me say good morning?

I frowned and decided to confront him.  We met halfway.  He handed me a Starbucks coffee and said, “I ordered what I thought was your usual.”

I looked dully down at the cup in my hand then back up to his face.  “Thank you?” I said, then with a little more confidence added, “But, you didn’t have to do that.”

“I lied to you about having to run errands at lunch yesterday.”

“I know, but you didn’t have to buy me a coffee in atonement.  So you had a date with your girlfriend and you told me a little white lie.  Big deal.  I’m actually more curious about why you’ve never mentioned her before, not that it’s any of my business.”

“She’s not my girlfriend.”

“But you said–”

“I know.  Yesterday I said she was.”

“You lied about that too?”

“No.  She was my girlfriend…yesterday.  No, that’s not quite true.  She was my fiancée…yesterday.  She’s not anymore.”

“Oh.”  I held on for dear life to a sympathetic expression.

“We broke up.”

“Yesterday apparently.  I’m so sorry, Jon.” Liar.

“It’s okay.  It was something I needed to do, was dreading doing but now that it’s done, I feel a lot better.”  He shrugged. “She’d been seeing someone else anyway,” he added without emotion.

“Oh.  Wow, I’m sorry, Jon.  How long were you engaged?  Are you okay?”

“I’m perfectly fine.  But I’m sorry that I lied to you.”

I flipped a hand at him.  “Please.  It was so not about me.  But, no worries.  Thanks for the coffee though.  That was really nice of you but totally unnecessary.  Next one is on me, okay?”  Stuff a sock in it already and stop licking your chops, you shameless hussy.  He did not break it off to be with you.  Plus, he’s a co-worker.  Remember what happened the last time you skipped down that thorny path.

Relief flooded his face, fanning the flames of my conceit,  because he seemed more troubled that he’d lied to me than that he’d broken off his engagement.  An engagement whose length remained a question mark.

“You got it.  Lunch today then?”

“Sure.  I’ll call my husband and cancel our nooner.  Kidding.”  I gave him a friendly nudge on the arm with the side of my head, then returned to my desk with my coffee.  He smiled at me over the low wall of the cubicle divider as I retook my chair, holding my eyes as I sipped my coffee.  I hoped he couldn’t see that I was grinning like an idiot between sips.  Oh boy, was I in trouble.

AW Flash Fiction – 9/27/09 “Graduation”

Flash Fiction–We have 90 minutes from when the theme word (Graduation) is posted.  I did this one in 67 minutes and it’s one of my favorites so far.

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“Claire. Come look at him. There he goes again,” exclaimed my boyfriend, Guy, as he watched our newly adopted dog Rainman in our fenced backyard.

I looked over Guy’s shoulder to see Rainman running laps around the yard, barking wildly before finally taking a flying leap at the gate. He then jumped up toward the low hanging branches of the tree in the middle of the yard before doing a few back flips, which I thought was so cool and was why I adopted him in the first place. He’d then repeat his antics over and over again until we brought him in for dinner.

When he wasn’t being an endless bundle of energy, he would sit at my feet or lay on his back in my lap and stare at me. He’d cock his head side to side as if trying to figure me out. When he tired of that game, he’d give me a doggie kiss, dry hump my leg a few times and then lift his leg and pee on Guy’s pants before whining to be let out to resume his doggie Olympics.

“Maybe we should enroll him in obedience school,” I said, feeling guilty for the hundredth time in less than a week about my choice of dog from our local humane society.

“Great idea, Babe, here’s the yellow pages, knock yourself out,” Guy said as he walked over to me and handed me the book already open to obedience schools for dogs. “If he learns to mind you, he’ll mind me since I’m the alpha around here.”

“You think you are,” I muttered but took the book and began to search the listings for the one that jumped out at me as being ‘the one’.

I had a sixth sense about things like this so I always went with my gut. My finger landed and remained motionless at ‘Scully’s School for Wayward Canine’s’. I liked the name. Scully. Just like in the X-Files.

Rainman and I signed up and for the next six weeks, we drove across town to the commercial strip center that Scully’s rented. From the first session, I knew something was both different and odd about Scully’s. Not in a bad way, but definitely unorthodox.

Scully spent most of his time with the owners while the dogs played with each other in a fenced in area. He taught us how to hold the leash, how to control our voices, the “right” things to say to our dogs, that sort of thing. At the end of the class, he’d call the dogs over to the gate, pet them and whisper a few words to them as he matched dog to owner and bid us goodbye until the following week. I have to say, it was the easiest class I’d ever taken.

On graduation day, we all proudly entered the fenced area with our now obedient dogs on their leashes. When I said ‘sit’, Rainman sat. When I said ‘stay’, Rainman sat on his haunches until I bid him to come to me. He was perfect and I had never been more proud of what we had accomplished together. Too bad Guy hadn’t come to see the graduation ceremonies.

As Rainman and I got in the car to go home, I said, “Rainman, you know what? I’m an excellent driver, yeah, an excellent driver,” as a joke. Rainman laid down on the passenger seat and put his paws over his eyes as if trying to tell me just how lame he thought my little joke was. “Aw, you know I love you, Rainman, more than anything.” He perked up and started to pant. I reached over and scratched his head.

“Woof!” said Rainman.

“Woof, woof!” I said back and then laughed.

When we walked in the house, I immediately noticed some things were missing.

“Guy?” I yelled. No answer. I walked into the kitchen and there on the table was a note from Guy basically telling me that he’d left me for another woman and taken his stuff. The asshole had put one of Rainman’s pawprints at the bottom of the page as a joke.

After crying a few tears that I realized didn’t feel very sincere, I looked at Rainman and said, “It’s just you and me, Rainman, my little graduate with honors.”

Rainman said, “Woof!”

I said, “Woof, woof!” and went to bed to read a book before I dozed off.

A movement in my bed behind me woke me a little after 7 AM. “Is that you, Rainman?” I was still a little groggy but reached back behind me and scratched his hairy belly.

“Woof!” said a man’s voice.

“Woof yourself,” I said and then realized that Rainman didn’t sound like Rainman.

I sat bolt upright and looked to my left and saw lying next to me the most gorgeous man I’d ever laid my eyes on. What I thought had been Rainman’s belly had actually been his chest. I lifted the sheets and saw that he was naked and very much a man from head to toe and all the parts in between.

“Lie down,” the man commanded.

I laid on my back. I couldn’t do otherwise even if I’d wanted to.

“Now give us a kiss,” he said as he leaned over and kissed me, the most wonderful kiss I’d ever experienced.

“Rainman?” I asked, thinking that perhaps I was either still asleep or had lost my marbles.

“Yes Claire?” he said as he began to remove my nightgown, kissing every inch of my skin as he exposed it.

“What are you doing?”

“I’m being your best friend.” And oh how he was doing exactly that.

“Is this what they taught you at Scully’s?” I asked in a voice that barely sounded like my own because Rainman was quite busy being the best friend I’d ever had.

“No, this is what they taught YOU at Scully’s,” he said between his most friendly ministrations. “You were the top student and I was so proud of you at graduation.”

“Woof!” I said as I sighed.