AW Flash Fiction–“The Wall”–2/27/11

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Sarah and I frequented He’s Not Here every Friday night. I wasn’t a fan of the place but ever since she’d met this water polo player, she’d been on patrol for him. The guy had asked for her phone number, but she hadn’t had a pen and by the time she’d borrowed one, the guy had left with his buddies. So, we staked out the front table and nursed our drinks from eight until eleven every Friday.

“Why don’t you just find out his name and call him.” I chowed down on the pizza we’d ordered, also part of our Friday night routine.

“I tried that. But none of them were him.” She looked over my shoulder to check out the latest patrons. Her eyes drifted back to mine when she’d inspected and rejected.

“Wait. What? He told you he was a water polo player and now you tell me that was a lie?” Gah! Why couldn’t she take her licks and say, ‘I’ve been had’ and move on?

“He is a water polo player, just not at UNC.”

“Ok, where then?”

She sighed. “Not Duke or NC State or Wake Forest. I checked all those.”

I dropped my pizza and raised up on my elbows, hands clasped. “And why do you still think he’s what he says he was? Men can be such liars sometimes.”

Sarah cocked her head to the side and sighed. “Because I could see the sincerity in his eyes, Marlene. Some truths can’t be faked. You need to learn to take more chances.”

“Right…” I gave up arguing with her and dug into my pizza and beer.

At nine thirty, HE walked in. Not Mr. Phantom Water Polo Player, but Mr. Physics Grad Student. I’d seen him on campus before, always with a serious look on his face, an overstuffed backpack on his shoulder. His clothes had a devil may care appearance to them and best of all, he was alone.

I kicked Sarah under the table and nodded with my head.

“Oh my God, Marlene, it’s your Edward.” Sarah had read all the Twilight books and referred to appealing men as either Edwards, if they had an air of danger and mystery to them, or Jacobs, if they seemed more earthy and laid back and smiled a lot. “You must go talk to him.”

I grimaced. It was one thing to egg Sarah on, but quite another to have to be the brave one.

“Go on, scaredy cat. What’s the worst that could happen? He says or acts like he’s not interested. That’s only one degree different from where you are today.”

My throat constricted and I swallowed hard. I couldn’t choke now. I stood and followed him as he winded his way through the bar. He passed several empty tables and kept walking. Where was he going? To the men’s room? No, he already passed the turn.

I stopped and turned back to see Sarah flipping her hand at me in a waving forward motion. Her lips formed the word “Go”.

When I turned back around, HE had stopped at the “Wall”, so-called because it was a popular spot for students to post items for sale, to find rides, apartments, roommates, lost puppies. Anything and everything was fair game for posting on the wall.

I watched as he withdrew a sheet of paper from his hip pocket, unfolded then tacked it up. Rather than retrace his steps through the bar, he ducked out the back door. I’d lost my chance unless I lowered my pride enough to chase after him.

Instead, I closed the gap between me and the Wall and found what he’d posted.

To the brunette who wears the red Disneyland jacket, who sits at the front table every Friday night from eight to eleven with her girlfriend: I’m not a bar person, but I’d love to meet you. Please call me at 867-5309. Danny.”

What the hell? Was HE Danny? I wore a red Disneyland windbreaker and those certainly were my hours. I found a pen in my pocket and wrote beneath his note: “Girl in the red Disneyland jacket would love to meet man who posted this sheet of paper on 2/25. Please confirm if you’re him.

Back at my table, I shared my near miss with Sarah. I didn’t tell her about the note because I knew she’d insist that I call sight unseen. For the next hour, we drank our beers and chatted up a couple of fellows who joined us then left disappointed that we weren’t as easy as they’d first assumed.

“Off to the ladies room,” I announced at ten-thirty. Only another half hour to go.

I passed the turn for the bathrooms and walked to the wall instead.

I read the sheet. Someone had written below my message. “Take a chance and call the guy. Don’t be so shallow.” Who’d done that? I withdrew my pen and added, “Not being shallow, just cautious. If the man who posted this is the author, I REALLY want to meet you.” Pen recapped, I be-bopped off to the bathroom.

When I came out, I checked the wall again. Someone had added, “I think you should call the guy. If you’ve been here every Friday night from eight to eleven, it’s time to try a new game.

I growled and wrote: “For your information, I’ve been coming here to keep a friend company, not for my own prowling purposes.” Whoever kept writing on my note was starting to tick me off. I decided to fall back, somewhat out of sight.

I saw the back of his head first. It was HIM. How he’d managed to keep slipping in unnoticed befuddled me. He paused at the wall for a moment, then started writing. Before he could escape, I closed the distance and read what he wrote.

This isn’t about her. It’s about you.”

I looked up and made eye contact, then turned back to the board and wrote, “A girl can’t be too careful these days.”

As soon as I added my period, he extended his hand and wrote, “I promise you, he’s a decent guy.”

The space started to run out, so I untacked the sheet and flipped it over. At the top I wrote, “How do you know?

Nice try. Let’s just say, I know.

I drew a tic-tac-toe grid, and added an X in the lower right corner. He reached over and added an O in the center. Back and forth we added X’s and O’s until the game ended in a draw. “Now what?” I wrote.

You call.

Alright.”

He gets off work at eleven.”

OK, I’ll call then.

The man and I looked at each other then nodded. He trotted off into the bar’s kitchen. That explained a lot.

I headed back to my table.

“What took you so long?” Sarah asked.

“There was a line.”

“Well, it’s eleven. Time to call it a night.” Sarah stood and drew on her jacket. “I’m tired.”

Outside, I paused and took in the cool February air. Sarah found her car and drove off with a wave. I pulled out my cell phone and dialed. ‘Danny’ answered on the first ring. “Hi, I’m the girl in the red Disneyland jacket,” I announced in a rush of breath.

My Edward strolled out of the bar, his cell phone pressed to his ear, and came to stand in front of me. “I see that. I’m Danny.”

“I know.”

We flipped our cell phones closed at the same time and smiled at each other.

“I’m Marlene. Care to join me for a Tic-tac-toe rematch?”

“I’d love to.”

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7 thoughts on “AW Flash Fiction–“The Wall”–2/27/11

  1. I thoroughly enjoyed it C ~~ had me chuckling out loud at places ~~ I actually began to read faster and faster , as the tension mounted and the two posted back and forth on the wall , eager to see how the scenario would play out in the end .

    • Thank you, Mish! Someone posted at AW that the wall was a low tech version of texting. LOL Guess I was showing my age somewhat. Anyway, I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      • Well I could identify with it so I guess it puts me in the same boat as you ~~ revealing my age somewhat LOL !!!

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