AW Flash Fiction–“What I dug up…”

Flash fiction = 90 minutes from the reveal of the theme word or words to posting of edited product on the AW website.

I already see a few grammatical mistakes and some miscalculations in my dates and math, but whatev’…

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At age sixty, my mother talked my father into painting their home three different shades of purple. She felt that at her age, she’d earned the right to behave a bit eccentrically and he’d agreed. Plus he was color blind and couldn’t have cared less. The neighbors quickly dubbed it the Peacock house and the name stuck since it was on a corner and an easily recognizable landmark. It was probably the only purple house in New Egypt, New Jersey.

When my mother passed away, a decade after my father, I inherited the house at 25 Bright Road. My sister and I had grown up in that sleepy little corner of rural New Jersey, so I was very familiar with both the home and the town. My husband, Joel, grew up in the area too. We met at the feeder high school we both went to in Allentown, New Jersey. Given that New Egypt was a short commute from both of our jobs and that our children were both in college, we decided to move into my childhood home. My younger sister thought we were crazy but after she’d swept through and snatched up a few “heirlooms” she’d always wanted, she gave us her blessing.

“Should we repaint the house?” Joel asked after we’d unpacked the last box.

“That’s a tough one,” I said, resting my weary legs on our modern sofa that felt strangely out of place. “This house has been purple for nearly two decades and is somewhat of a landmark.”

“Yeah, but it’s purple, Dana,” he said screwing his face into that look that I understood very well after almost twenty-five years of marriage. If looks could speak, his would have said, “Purple houses are for chicks, old unmarried ones at that.”

I said, “I’d rather spend the money redoing the yard, maybe put a pool in the back.” Plus I secretly kind of liked the purple color but I didn’t want to push that angle if I didn’t have to.

“The yard does need some work, that’s for sure. And we should probably put in new appliances,” he said, rubbing his chin. He did all the cooking so I wasn’t going to argue on that point.

My husband, Joel, was still a handsome devil even at fifty. I remembered doing a lot of daydreaming about him in my old bedroom on the second floor. I wrote all kinds of gushy entries in my journal that I had to hide from my nosy sister. Most were typical teenaged girl stuff–“Mrs. Dana Sabinowitz, Mrs. Joel Sabinowitz, Dana and Joel, Joel and Dana.”

“Okay,” I said as I rose from the sofa, “so we won’t worry about the paint for a while then.”

I walked through the kitchen and assessed the ancient appliances, mentally calculating the cost then glanced out the back window into the yard. Mom and Dad had a three-acre lot. There used to be a huge rye field behind their land when I was a kid and if it rained a lot and then cooled off enough for things to freeze, my sister and I had our own private ice-skating rink. But that rye field was gone now and a housing development had taken its place.

Joel walked in behind me and wrapped his arms around my waist, his chin dropped down on my shoulder. He looked out the window with me, both of us assessing the yard. “A pool would be great,” he sighed.

A week later, the pool guys showed up with their excavation equipment and began to dig a hole big enough for a rectangular pool twenty feet by forty feet. I could hardly wait to have my own pool to enjoy during the hot and humid Jersey summers.

“Hey, Dana!” yelled Joel. “Come here a second.”

“What’s up!” I yelled back. “I’m kind of in the middle of something.” I had blown the dust off of my sewing machine and was making all new curtains for the house. I needed it to be my home, not my mother’s home and it was the little things like curtains that made a huge difference.

“You need to come see what I dug up,” came his voice, a little closer now.

I looked over my shoulder and saw him walk into my sewing room, his feet filthy.

“Joel, your feet!”

“Oh, sorry,” he said as he kicked off his shoes and laid them on my patterns.

I sighed at his reckless oblivion to my sewing gear but gave him my attention. “What did you dig up? I hope you didn’t find the bones of some of our childhood pets.” I shuddered as I briefly remembered Nicky and Sam, our dog and cat, that we’d buried near the edge of the lot.

“No, it’s some kind of tin box that has your name etched on the outside. Look.” He produced a very dirty and rusty tin box that still bore the faint traces of Starsky and Hutch on the cover. Oh how I’d been in love with Hutch back then.

“Let me see,” I said, taking the box from him. “Have you opened it?”

“Nah, it says ‘private’ on the outside so I figured I had better honor your wishes or there would be hell to pay.” He grinned broadly at me, that same killer smile that slayed me when I first met him at age fifteen.

I took the box from him and tried to open it but it wouldn’t budge, probably because of all the rust.

“Here, let me go get some tools to see if I can pry it open for you,” Joel said as he trotted off in his socked feet.

While he was gone, I racked my brain for what I had put in this box, why and when I had buried it. I barely remembered the box so I thought that I probably bought it specifically for burying. For a brief second I remembered a gerbil my sister and I had owned for a mere three months before it died. I shook my head as I remembered that we’d buried it in a velvet bag I had made out of fabric scraps.

Joel ran in with a few tools and within five minutes had broken off enough of the rust sealing the edges to loosen the lid. He handed it to me to do the final unveiling.

As I lifted the lid, I saw a red journal inside. The cover bore a few traces of mold and dirt but otherwise appeared to be in fairly good shape.

“Looks like some sort of journal,” Joel said as he looked over my shoulder.

I lifted it out and all the hours I’d spent pouring my heart out onto the pages of this journal came rushing back in a torrent. I knew the types of things I’d written but did I dare show them to Joel?

“Yeah, it’s my journal from when I was sixteen and seventeen. I can tell from the dates inside the cover.” I flipped to the entry I made on my sixteenth birthday, November 18, 1976. There it was. The reason for all my cloak and dagger secrecy.

I handed the journal to Joel, opened to the entry that I didn’t even need to read to remember what it said.

Joel took it and read aloud, “Dear Diary, I will marry Joel Sabinowitz. I know this in my heart. One day I will be Mrs. Dana Sabinowitz. I even know the date. Don’t ask me how I know, but I do. I love him. I will always love him. And one day he’ll love me. And on January 9, 1984, I predict that I will become Mrs. Joel Sabinowitz.”

I smiled at the incredulous look on his face.

“But how…” He continued to gape at me.

See, I had married Joel Sabinowitz on January ninth of 1984. Don’t ask me how I’d correctly predicted the actual date down to the year but somehow I had.

I reached out to take back the journal from him. I didn’t want him to read any more of my entries because if he had he’d have seen similar predictions and swoony entries declaring my love for David Moore, Grant Swerdel and Larry Johnson. And what he didn’t know couldn’t hurt him.

I Killed My Main Characters…

It wasn’t my idea but a fellow AW’er posted a challenge in the flash fiction section–“kill off one of your NaNo characters”.  Well, I killed off both of my main characters in a mere 979 words.  Here are Shelby and Colin’s last fictional moments, at least in this one alternate universe:

The Last Kiss

Shelby examined her fingernails thinking she was due for a fill. It had been at least four weeks since she’d last had one and the gap between the acrylic and her own nail bed yawned at her like a chasm. She called her salon to see if they could squeeze her in before her date that night.

“Harry, hi it’s Shelby. …Yeah, it’s been a while. You got anything open today? …I’d prefer you. …Who’s that? Someone new? …What’s her name? …Tiffany. Okay, well go ahead and put me down for Tiffany at five then. See ya.”

With an hour to kill before her appointment, she decided to leave early and go to the video rental shop near her salon. The Last Kiss had just come out on dvd and she’d been pining to watch it. Scanning the store’s shelves, she asked herself the same question she asked every visit, ‘would it be in the T’s or in the L’s?’. Checking the L’s first, she came up empty handed which only made her grumble at the lunacy of filing movies beginning with the word “The” under ‘T’.

Finding no copies left, she walked to the front to look on the recent returns cart. As she made her way, another woman dovetailed into her path and they arrived simultaneously. Shelby eyed the woman suspiciously for a moment before launching into her search. The woman was tiny and Asian with black as midnight hair and cold soulless eyes. She appeared to be about forty and was no taller than five feet.

They both picked and pawed and maneuvered through the dvd’s.

“Aha!” cried Shelby as her fingers laid claim to a copy of The Last Kiss.

But it wouldn’t budge because the woman had grasped the bottom end. A tug of war ensued with the two women scowling at each other.

“I saw it first,” Shelby said as she jerked the dvd box sharply.

“No. You lie. I saw first,” the woman said in choppy English, a look of grim determination on her face.

With a final jerk followed by a spin to leverage her body into the movement, Shelby wrestled the dvd away from the woman. She grinned in triumph and said, “Sorry. I hope you find another copy,” then ran to the checkout to rent it so she wouldn’t be late for her appointment.

When Shelby walked into the salon, her dvd clutched in her hands, she checked in with Harry at the front desk.

“Hi Shelby. Tiffany just got back from her break and she’s ready to take you now.” He directed her to the back of the salon and indicated which chair Shelby should take. Shelby sat with her selected polish color in hand and waited for her nail tech to return to her work station and get started.

“Hello. I’m Tiffany,” the woman said as she sat down. It was the woman from the video store.

Crap, thought Shelby. “Oh, hey, I hope there are no hard feelings about the dvd back there.”

Tiffany waved a hand as if to say ‘no worries’ then reached for Shelby’s right hand. She tut-tutted as she took in the delinquent state of Shelby’s nail maintenance but began sanding down the margins. The woman was rougher than Shelby was used to being treated but she really needed the fill and figured she was due a few karmic pokes.

“I have special new gel I use. Last longer and not as thick. You want to try it?” Tiffany asked.

“How much?”

“Same price as regular.”

“Okay, let’s give it a go,” Shelby said agreeably.

For the next thirty minutes, Tiffany worked silently, completing all the usual steps of a routine fill. She painted Shelby’s nails a deep dark burgundy color, the color of blood.

Shelby admired the woman’s work when she was done and tipped her generously.

“Thanks, Tiffany. You did a great job,” she exclaimed as she rose to leave.

“You good customer. You come back and ask for me next time okay?” Tiffany said with a big grin on her face.

Shelby zipped home and started dinner for her and her boyfriend. She admired her burgundy nails as her hands flew through the motions of prepping the vegetables, flattening the chicken breasts and uncorking the wine. The evening was going perfectly so far. Colin would be over soon, they’d have a nice dinner, then cuddle up on her sofa and watch the dvd she’d rented.

When the doorbell rang, Shelby moved to answer it. She still wore her apron and a layer of flour covered her hair and face. Laughing at her disheveled state, she opened the door to greet Colin.

“Well, hey there handsome,” she exclaimed as she leaned in to kiss him. “I’ve got a special treat for you right here.” She whipped out the butcher knife from behind her back and in a swift upward motion, slashed his throat.

Blood spurted in her face then gushed out in a torrent, through his ashen fingers,  down his arms and on the front of his shirt.  His eyes regarded her with bewildered horror.  A sickening gurgling sound came instead of his breath.

Shelby couldn’t will herself to do anything but watch until Colin dropped to the floor, the last trickles of his life seeking refuge in her carpet.  She didn’t know why she had done it, only that she’d been compelled by a force other than her own will.  It now commanded her arm to rotate and turn the blade inward.  In a flash, her arm jerked and she gasped when the blade pierced her heart.  “No,” she cried as her eyes widened from the shock and penetrating pain.  The floor rose up to meet her as she collapsed with a crumpling thud.

As she lay there next to Colin, she saw the dvd lying on the floor where she’d casually tossed it and her purse when she got home. The Last Kiss. On the cover was a crime scene photograph of her apartment. She and Colin lay side by side on the floor outlined in chalk. The text at the bottom of the dvd’s case said, “Revenge is a dish best served cold.” She took a last look at her nails, the blood on her hands a perfect match, before everything faded to black.