AW Flash Fiction — Right Place / Wrong Time — 10/10/10

The roar of the crowd made meaningful conversation impossible. As a result, most communication tended to be of the most primitive type–hand gestures, nods and head shakes. Those who attempted more complex communication did so only because they enjoyed the close proximity of lips to ears, breasts to arms, hips to thighs.

Neely’s body grazed that of a new man she’d met the week before. She’d thought he looked handsome in his uniform and on a dare from a girlfriend told him so. She knew he’d returned a week to the day to chat her up because she’d not so subtly hinted that she hoped he would. An accelerating flirtation was afoot. Problem was her friend Rowan wasn’t so appreciative of the soldier’s attentions. She thought she’d solved that problem by coming an hour earlier than usual on her regular pub night.

That turned out to be a bad assumption. She frowned as soon as she saw Rowan enter with three of his mates. He zeroed in on her with a hard glare and a rigid line where his mouth should have been. A few seconds later and he drew up to her side and leaned in to her ear.

“Come with me,” he said in his lilting English that betrayed his Irish upbringing.

“Can’t it wait? I’m still drinking my pint.”

Rowan encircled his arm around her waist and tugged her toward him. “No. It can’t.”

She stumbled and sloshed her beer onto her feet. “Let go! Damn, you’re bossy.”

“Let go of the lady, man. It’s obvious she doesn’t want to leave with you.” Her savior, Tom, looking dashingly handsome in his uniform, blocked Rowan’s path.

The two men squared off, almost identical in size but Rowan wild and rangy to Tom’s tightly controlled calm.

Rowan released Neely’s arm but moved into Tom’s space. Neely knew him well enough to recognize when his temper had been provoked. He’d been in that state from the moment he entered the pub. Neely knew a direct confrontation with a British soldier would shove him over the edge. Rowan had never professed much love for the British military, having lived in Belfast during the height of military occupation.

She’d have to broker the peace or world war three might break out at her beloved Lamb and Ram pub.

“It’s okay, Tom. Just give us a minute. I’ll be right back.”

Tom shot a malevolent warning at Rowan but nodded at Neely.

Outside the pub, the temperature had dropped enough to send a shiver through Neely but had the added welcome effect of cooling some of Rowan’s wrath.

“What kind of low life you hanging out with these days, Neely? That’s the same bloke who was hitting on you last week isn’t it?”

Neely rubbed her arms then hugged herself to keep warm. “What do you want, Rowan?”

“Aww, don’t be like that. Give us a kiss first?”

She sighed but leaned in and gave him a peck on the lips. They no longer dated but Rowan still seemed to think he had some sort of claim on her. She inwardly seethed but kept her mouth shut. Now that he was calmer, she didn’t want to create any more ripples.

He offered her a cigarette and as they smoked, they volleyed a round of idle banter to keep the tension at bay.  When the mundane topics ran out of steam and they were both silent,  Rowan moved a step closer to her and threw down his cigarette. He ran his hand through his hair and scanned the area before he spoke.

“Gotta go away for a bit of a holiday and thought you might like to come.”

“Jesus Christ, Rowan. I gotta job, a limited VISA and even more limited funds. I can’t take a vacation.”

A van turned the corner and came to a stop in front of them. Neely recognized the chug-chug-chug of its gamey engine. She knew she’d see Ian at the wheel and a quick dart of her eyes over Rowan’s shoulder proved her correct.

“Ian. All set?” Rowan spoke but never removed his eyes from Neely’s.”

“Yeah. Cat’s in the cradle and the cargo’s loaded and secured.  We got two minutes.” 

Rowan smiled at Neely. “Sure you won’t change your mind?”

She shook her head. “Nah, I can’t.” Thumbing over her shoulder, she added, “I need to get back.”

A slow shake of his head was her only response. Two iron grips seized her from behind by the elbows and shoved her toward the back of the van.

“Let go! Rowan! What is this?” She fought to break free but the hands that held her captive tensed and tightened, urging her forward with even greater force.

Rowan opened the back door of the van and shoved Neely inside then jumped in behind her. She landed hard on a large bulky object in the center of the floor and gasped when she realized Tom lay bound and gagged beneath her.  His closed eyes and motionless body told her he’d been drugged into unconsciousness.

The van revved then tore away from the curb, tossing Neely into Rowan as it took a corner too sharply.

“Rowan. What have you done?”

“You bloody had to be at the Lamb and Ram early tonight didn’t you, sniffing around like a whore after this rutting bastard.” Rowan fisted his hand in Neely’s hair and pulled her to a sitting position. “Guess you were at the right place at the wrong bloody time. So you might as well sit back and enjoy the ride cause you’re in it for the duration, Neely-girl.”  He pulled her to him and kissed her, then laughed when she jerked away and wiped her mouth.

The blast at the Lamb and Ram now several blocks away, shook her hard enough to force her teeth together, her tongue its painful casualty. 

From the far reaches of her mind she dredged up the only solace available to her.  The Lord is my shepherd, I shall not want…

(to be continued)
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And that was a warm up exercise / back story for my 2010 NaNo novel.  It’s been edited from the version posted at AW to put a bit more meat into it.

October Blog Chain–“Masquerade”

 

Welcome to the Masquerade

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This month I’m both hosting and kicking off the blog chain.  Our prompt is Halloween-based: “Masquerade”. Following me will be Hillary Jacques.  All the other chain participants are listed at the end of this post.

My post is a flash fiction teaser to introduce my 2010 NaNoWriMo novel.  I’ve had my outline done for months and have been chomping at the bit to start it.  In keeping with the spirit of NaNoWriMo, any words recycled from this post, I won’t count toward my 50k goal.  In its first draft glory to provide a taste of what I’ll be up to next month, here’s Sins of Our Mothers:

<<<—nicked an early peek at the 2010 logo

Neely stared at the spreadsheet on her computer screen, searching for the logic flaw that had stumped her staff.  It had to be there because the result made no sense.  She knew she’d find it though; she always did.  That’s why she was the manager, why she had ascended to the top financial position in the mid-sized company that employed her.  Problem-solving was her special forte.  No malfeasance went undetected on her guard.

The corporate cream walls of her office bore no photographs or art, only diplomas, licenses and plaques celebrating her successes.  The surface of her desk was free of clutter and personal effects other than a small figurine of a child’s cartoon character.

Neely turned from the screen and removed her glasses, pinched the bridge of her nose.  Her company had installed forced break software to prevent cumulative trauma injuries like carpal tunnel syndrome.  A video of a man doing various stretches filled her screen.  She was supposed to do them with him but the break Nazi went unheeded.

Fingers reached out to stroke the head of the figurine, evoking a small smile.

Her phone rang and she welcomed the interruption.  Its display revealed her caller to be Gretchen, her administrative assistant.  She answered on the second ring.

“Neely, there are two men here to see you from the FBI.”  In a softer voice she added, “They have guns.”

Neely swallowed.  FBI?  At her office?  They wanted to see her?  She’d filed a claim when some fraudsters started writing counterfeit checks on her company’s bank account.  Sending two armed FBI agents to investigate seemed a bit over the top.  Surely…

Her gut clenched and the blood drained from her extremities as she rose to greet her visitors.

With a shaking hand, she smoothed down her pencil skirt then slipped her feet back inside her heels.  She didn’t bother to check her reflection; she knew what she’d see but didn’t care.  At forty-five years of age, the Greys had begun their Hun-like invasion, inviting their friends the Wrinkles and the Sags to encamp with them.  Her Auburn forces would soon be overcome; her skin had surrendered long ago.

Five more steps brought her into the lobby area where two very large men stood, and yes, they were armed.  The fog descended in her head, and ghosts from her past wagged accusatory fingers.

The taller man turned when he saw her approach.  “Ms. Neely Shaw? formerly known as Neely Dawn Spencer?”

“Yes.”

“Ms. Shaw, you are under arrest for capital crimes against the British government and its citizens.  You will come with us pending your extradition to the United Kingdom for prosecution.”

Gretchen stood, her face ashen.  “What?  This has to be some mistake.  Ms. Shaw is a U.S. citizen.”

“Gretchen, in my contacts list is the name of an attorney, Ray Reynolds.  Please call him for me.”

“Yes, uh-of course.  Should I call Mark too?”  Gretchen had her telephone already in hand.

“No!  Not Mark, not yet.  Just Ray.”  She looked at the man who’d spoken to her.  “Where are you taking me?”

He addressed his words to Gretchen, “She’ll go first to the Justice Center for arraignment then to the federal jail next door.  Her attorney can meet her at the Justice Center.”  To Neely, he said, “Ms. Shaw I must inform you of your rights…”

Neely didn’t listen.  She’d seen enough television to have practically memorized the Miranda rights recitation.  It was a formality.  She had nothing to say, wouldn’t say anything, not without her attorney present.  A quick glance at Gretchen’s face offered some relief.  They couldn’t actually have a case against her…could they?

The shorter man produced a pair of handcuffs.  “I’ll need to cuff you ma’am.  I’m sorry.”

Gretchen jumped from her chair and stood between Neely and the taller man, her hands clenched into fists.  Her phone’s headset dangled off the edge of her desk.  “You guys are making a horrible mistake!  Ms. Shaw has never even left the country.  She’s terrified to fly.  How could she possibly have done anything warranting extradition?  She doesn’t even have a passport.”  The face she turned to Neely puckered and wrinkled.  “Tell them they’ve got it wrong!”

Neely shook her head but smiled, remembering Gretchen’s tut-tutting over her inability to cross the Canadian border the prior month for a special meeting with their largest Canadian client.  Gretchen had grumbled for days about having to coordinate the video-conferencing.

Her smile faltered when she remembered the events of twenty-five years ago.  She’d been a naive girl fresh out of college, looking for a summer of carefree fun before taking on the strictures of Corporate America. Once upon a time she’d had a passport, hadn’t been afraid to fly, hadn’t been afraid of a lot of things.  That girl was dead, long ago buried and she’d hoped, forgotten.

She was wrong.

Her masquerade had come to its conclusion.  What she’d dreaded most now stared her in the face.  Just when she’d finally allowed herself to relax, to open up, to love again.

As the two men led her out, each holding one of her elbows, she glanced at her wrists manacled in front of her.  Not unlike another pair of wrists she remembered, wrists that belonged to a soldier, a man kidnapped and tortured by enemies she’d aided, a man for whom she’d lied and killed.

She caught sight of herself in the mirror behind Gretchen’s desk as she passed.  The face she saw, unmasked and unguarded, mouthed, “Finally…”

More to come of Neely’s story in November.

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Auburn Assassin https://clairegillian.wordpress.com/ and direct link to her post
Hillary Jacques http://hillaryjacques.blogspot.com and direct link to her post
Aimee Laine www.aimeelaine.com/writing/blog and direct link to her post
Ralph Pines http://thewonderingswordsman.wordpress.com/ and direct link to his post
Veinglory http://erecsite.blogspot.com/ and direct link to her post
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PASeaholtz http://paseasholtz.com/ and direct link to his post
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Amy Doodle www.mindovermullis.com and direct link to her post
CScottMorris CScottMorrisBooks.com and direct link to his post
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